Tuesday 22 June 2010

Writing Moderation

Wel

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­­­­­Well were do I start with TEECEE she has bright green eyes like fresh new green grass TEECEE has pale pink lips and when she puts her chap stick on her lips shine and glitter in the sun light. She has blond hair like a ginger cat and did I tell you about her organ which she where’s it EVERY day but some how it looks good on her. TEECEE is all ways brown when she comes back from holiday in the south­­­­­ island (she loves it there). Did you know that Tee­­­­­­­­­­­­cee has a scoter it is bright red like the filming hot sun­­­­­­ she rides it every where she all so has a lap top and she never lets it out of her site and I mean never. TEECEE is a lovely person and she loves her job teaching and is all ways so happy like a big ball of sun shine she is so funny that she could be a comedian TEECEE is a outstanding teacher but I wander some times what else does TEECEE love? When she says hi to you in the morning it sets your day off like a kitten who just chute its first mouse. You are the best teacher TEECEE.

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My Fibonacci maths stariages

My Monster.

My Monster is a very small creature and about the size of a soccer ball he has BRIGHT orange fur and it spikes up like a boys hair who has been working on it for months and plus it is very sharp like a brand new knife that someone has been sharpening. His name is Bobby he is very friendly he has bright blue eyes like the summer blue sky and red lips like fire and his nose is as small as a M and M, Bobby LOVES to bounce he is like a jack in the box going off every 2 seconds and he has little spring on his legs (I think that is what helps him to bounce) about the size of a worm. He is a VERY cheeky little monster he likes to bounce around all day and play tricks like what he did to me. I found when I was walking home in fact I found a hole bunch of them just sitting there BUT I think that the orange one stood out for me and plus this one was the cute so I called it Bobby and that is how I found this little monster ( and I'm glad I did).


What did I do well: I put all my Personalty in to my work.
What did I learn: That when you describe some thing it makes you feel like you are there.
What is my next learning step: To describe my chracter more.

Sunday 20 June 2010

One of my best VL



I choose this piece because I love how I put the little bumps (bit marks) on the side and also how it is so colorful and I have neat writing.

Thursday 3 June 2010

X country goals



What did I learn: That I am a good runner and I can achieve my goals.
What did I do well: I made it in to the cross country.( but it was not on)
What well I do next time: Do harder goals.